Teresa

by Ailam Remard
  • April 23, 2008
  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

True friend
Elegant and beautiful
Random but still makes sense
Entertaining, makes me laugh
Still my little girly
Always.

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teenweirdo
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teenweirdo wrote a review · Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:51 am

Nice. By the way, thanks for critiquing my poem. :D

"Girly." That's cute. The whole poem is so sweet. The one problem I see is that I don't think it has a definite rhyme scheme. Right now the rhyme scheme is all over the place. Work on that, and it will be pretty good.

Good luck with your writing! :)

~Jamie



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